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Unforgetable moments  

6/14/2009 10:19 am

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6/25/2009 7:23 pm

" Those blissful night and days "
Those night and days was blissful,
these nights and days are also blissful.
You were with me,in memory,
you are still here with me.

You given me all you had,
Unforgetable moments which we shared.
your morbelous body,your affection,
your surrender,your devotion,
that heavenly feeling,your passion
every moment still in my passesion.

I never foget, Oh!!! not to be forget,
sitting with you,
our hands over west,fully in rest.
we were silently felt,ourselves,
listening conversation of our soul.

how we felt,without saying a word,
the meeting of two hearts,
our heart beats,sungs love song,
unaware whats right or wrong.

how I think that you are not hear,
you are here in my home, every where.
You were with me,you are here with me.
your rememberance, you shared with me.

Its your decission to apart,
you were tired with regularity.
A boring life,a viced estability,
You are thinking that its end of afair,
you never gone from my memory,
How can you say its fair.

KUMAR
actionking33
472 posts 

6/24/2009 9:03 am

HAPPY TO READ THE UNITED SOULS;
SORRY TO READ THE BROKEN HEARTS.
WELL KNITTED POEM.

meghbristii

6/24/2009 5:06 am

Kumar,Nice post.Luv you,as always.

Now,please excuse me for saying a few things which are not related to your post.I think it very derogatory to discuss in a blog about anything beyond the post itself.So please pardon me.

My dear Ruby,I wont tell anything if my name was not mentioned here.Will you please take a bit pain of visiting our blog and criticising the poems,one by one,so that we can better our way of writing?And can I request you to be more specific about your criticism? - Brishti Mazumdar


kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/17/2009 9:08 am

    Quoting johnykol:
    woow..its really awesome sir.keep dpoing good work sir
THANKS FRIEND JOHNYKOL,WELCOME AGAIN IN MY HOME OF BLOGS....WITH LOVE ...KUMAR

johnykol
7 posts 

6/17/2009 6:24 am

woow..its really awesome sir.keep dpoing good work sir

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/16/2009 9:50 am

    Quoting swinger726:
    Hi Mr. Kumar,

    Your words are EXECLLANT,

    how we felt,without saying a word,
    the meeting of two hearts,
    our heart beats,sungs love song,
    unaware whats right or wrong.

    What an imagination this is,

    Waiting for some more,,,,,,,,

    Hope will get it soon.
Thanks Mr.Swinger,you are most welcome,have a good day....with love kumar

swinger726
195 posts 

6/16/2009 8:41 am

Hi Mr. Kumar,

Your words are EXECLLANT,

how we felt,without saying a word,
the meeting of two hearts,
our heart beats,sungs love song,
unaware whats right or wrong.

What an imagination this is,

Waiting for some more,,,,,,,,

Hope will get it soon.

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/16/2009 8:03 am

    Quoting ruby_ruby:
    Kumar I doubt it very much if you are not a poet,your words reflect that poetry is your passion & professional .Am I right ?

    Kumar Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

    All The Best In life,


    Ruby
Hi madam ruby,I dont know that I am a poet,You are not in doubt but i am still in doubt about it.In IFF so many members comments that I should walk out from english poetry.and in the same time some members encouraged me to write.
thanks to understand me .you are observing very deeply to my writing you co-operation and love is unforgetable.
with love ...kumar

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/16/2009 7:46 am

    Quoting ruby_ruby:
    Kumar it is not a flattery but I have seen & read one more Mystifying Poet Couple ,'MEGHBRISITI',

    When I compare their poems with yours I observe that they are not poems at all,simply writing their stories/emotion in stanza's and placing before us as a poem.Damn pity on that poet.

    Keep it your morale and writing it inspire me too,I am writing a quote by a old poet:

    You can close your eyes to things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel.

    KUMAR UR A POET OF IFF
Hi madam ruby,it is fact that I am poor in language,but as you said,I know the difference between essay and poetry,poetry just need the flow of thoughts like water of spring coming from hills and down on the ground and calm down its speed, giving peace ,life and utility to all.when we break this siquence the beauty of poetry vanished.I generally use simple words because this simlicity also gives smooth continuty to poem.difficult or uncommon word breaks always its tempo.Am I right?
Thanks for giving again me name.I am feeling that I am in sky...with love ..kumar

ruby_ruby
23 posts 

6/16/2009 4:52 am

Kumar it is not a flattery but I have seen & read one more Mystifying Poet Couple ,'MEGHBRISITI',

When I compare their poems with yours I observe that they are not poems at all,simply writing their stories/emotion in stanza's and placing before us as a poem.Damn pity on that poet.

Keep it your morale and writing it inspire me too,I am writing a quote by a old poet:

You can close your eyes to things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel.

KUMAR UR A POET OF IFF

ruby_ruby
23 posts 

6/16/2009 4:44 am

    Quoting kumarsambhava:
    hi,bro,khan.You given me all the credit,but I think that all of you who encouraged me to write more and more with your encouraged comments.that is why a joker learned to write.and as you had discribed,and you prayed for me a sun is rising.Just do9nt lift your hand from my back its your hand who staying me like a stud.you are and all my suporters are my back bone and my inspiration.thanks alot to feel me near your heart.i am about to posting a new poem which will cut the all confusion about friendship and passion.with love ....Kumar
Kumar I doubt it very much if you are not a poet,your words reflect that poetry is your passion & professional .Am I right ?

Kumar Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

All The Best In life,


Ruby

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/15/2009 8:20 am

    Quoting Khan76_:
    Kumar bro. your poems are very good to read, in your blogs simple and nice with a lot of depth.I look forward for them everyday, though I do not know how to comment on them. Thanks a lot.
    .. Keep writing.... One sunlit twilight Shining in the woods, Creeping by inches Up...All begins Once more. Forever...

hi,bro,khan.You given me all the credit,but I think that all of you who encouraged me to write more and more with your encouraged comments.that is why a joker learned to write.and as you had discribed,and you prayed for me a sun is rising.Just do9nt lift your hand from my back its your hand who staying me like a stud.you are and all my suporters are my back bone and my inspiration.thanks alot to feel me near your heart.i am about to posting a new poem which will cut the all confusion about friendship and passion.with love ....Kumar

Khan76_
428 posts 

6/15/2009 7:47 am

    Quoting kumarsambhava:
    Hi,bro.Khan.You always found me to give awards,wheres from you ambushing,and showering thses words.thanksyou
Kumar bro. your poems are very good to read, in your blogs simple and nice with a lot of depth.I look forward for them everyday, though I do not know how to comment on them. Thanks a lot.
.. Keep writing.... One sunlit twilight Shining in the woods, Creeping by inches Up...All begins Once more. Forever...


~♥~ Love bears, believes, endures all things. ~♥~

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/15/2009 1:46 am

    Quoting snowAngel2009:
    Hi,sir kumar,again a bang in IFF,you great,I love you soooo much
Hi,my angel kid after along time I heard you.thanks for comments..with love ....kumar

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/15/2009 1:45 am

    Quoting Devil10002:
    Hi,khan,you said everything,there is nothing to say,Sir,kumar please keep it up,dont stop writting.
thankyou Mr.devil you said everything without saying,you should be a writer actually....kumar

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/15/2009 1:39 am

    Quoting greatlion:
    Hi,nice one again,I think you are great in love poems,your imegination powe is unpraisable.
Thanks Mr,Greatlion,for sharing with me....kumar

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/15/2009 1:33 am

    Quoting Heavenly2009:
    you never gone from my memory,sambhava very good poem ...

    ~~Heavenly~~
thankyou madam heavenly,for comment....kumar

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/15/2009 1:31 am

Oh !!! thanks alot bro.grmini.to share with me....with love ...kumar

gemini369
963 posts

6/14/2009 11:06 pm

Heavenly2009
7 posts 

6/14/2009 10:56 pm

you never gone from my memory,sambhava very good poem ...

~~Heavenly~~

greatlion
25 posts 

6/14/2009 9:12 pm

Hi,nice one again,I think you are great in love poems,your imegination powe is unpraisable.

Devil10002
15 posts 

6/14/2009 9:07 pm

Hi,khan,you said everything,there is nothing to say,Sir,kumar please keep it up,dont stop writting.

snowAngel2009
70 posts 

6/14/2009 8:55 pm

Hi,sir kumar,again a bang in IFF,you great,I love you soooo much

kumarsambhava
1484 posts 

6/14/2009 4:53 pm

    Quoting Khan76_:
    SUPPER..... Kumar Bro. You have captured the feeling well with few words. Very nice .... Such beautiful poets imagery. Thank you for sharing your poems with us... I enjoy reading the poems on your page
Hi,bro.Khan.You always found me to give awards,wheres from you ambushing,and showering thses words.thanksyou

Khan76_
428 posts 

6/14/2009 2:43 pm

SUPPER..... Kumar Bro. You have captured the feeling well with few words. Very nice .... Such beautiful poets imagery. Thank you for sharing your poems with us... I enjoy reading the poems on your page

~♥~ Love bears, believes, endures all things. ~♥~

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